I need your help!!

so far , this is what I have done~
 when I look back , there is a lot of mistake , I know that I only finished about 10%

I try to finish it  , as fast as I could , but rushing it , made it a lot worst~  
so I will redo the lineart~ put more detail , recolour , 
and, study a lot more~

I give you permission to download and see the full resolution , 
and if you have anything to say , comment or critique , feel free to do so~